Bài viết tiếng anh the generation gap

Question

I live in a nuclear family with only my parents and my younger sister. Living in a nuclear family is more comfortable than an extended family because I don't think that it will have many rules. Therefor we will have more less problems. Every morning, my mother had to get up early to cook and prepare clothes for the whole family. Later,  my parents went to work, me and my younger sister went to school. In my family, learning is an important but each member must share housework with each other. My parents are open-minded, they always give us advice but they never try to impose their decisions on us. Sometimes conflict do happen in family, instead of explaining and arguing with parents, we sit together and discuss, we all think we need to understand each other better.

Answer 1

1. You wrote: ... have many rules. Therefor we will have more less problems. Every morning, my mother had ...

Feedback: English has two comparative adjective forms. Add -er to the end of one or two syllable adjectives. Use 'more' with longer adjectives. Do not use both 'more' and '-er' together. Did you mean simply "less"?

Error type: Comparative adjective error

Suggestion: less

 

2. You wrote: ...ts are open-minded, they always give us advice but they never try to impose their decision...

Feedback: Use a comma before "but" if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).

Error type: Punctuation error

Suggestion: advice, but

 

3. You wrote: ...uss, we all think we need to understand each other better.

Feedback: When the better belongs to each other, then you need to show possessiion with apostrophe + s. Revise: "each other's".

Error type: Possessive apostrophe error

Suggestion: each other's

 

4. You wrote: ... think we need to understand each other better.

Feedback: If the understanding is reciprocal, then you need a plural here because there is more than one better. Revise: "understand each other's betters".

Error type: Plural error

Suggestion: understand each other's betters