The best place to study

Question

Everybody has their own favorite place to study, for me, my bedroom is the best for three reasons. First of all, it is a private room, so it is quiet. Although the library of Dong A university where I study is quiet, sometimes there are some people making noise or disturbing me when I focus on my studies. That makes me so annoying. Second, my computer is always available for me. The computers in my school library is a lot but not always free, and the internet connection is poor too. Third, I don't need to move a lot to find study materials. I can find almost everything on the internet and it takes less time to find a book on my bookshelf than find the book I want on the library bookshelf. In sum, the best place that I think suitable to study is my bedroom.

Answer 1

 

Answer 2

Everybody has their own favorite place to study, for me, my bedroom is the best for three reasons. First of all, it is a private room, so it is quiet. Although the library of Dong A university where I study is quiet, sometimes there are some people making noise or disturbing me when I focus on my studies. That makes me so annoying. Second, my computer is always available for me. The computers in my school library is a lot but not always free, and the internet connection is poor too. Third, I don't need to move a lot to find study materials. I can find almost everything on the internet and it takes less time to find a book on my bookshelf than find the book I want on the library bookshelf. In sum, the best place that I think suitable to study is my bedroom.

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