Write a short paragraph about your volunteer idea.

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I'd like to tutor young children in the orphanage. I want to do that because I will be able to help them read and write fluently. That can bring them happiness and help them have the good knowledge to get the good life. I will ask my friend to help me. We will instruct children to do their homework at the weekend or in our free time.

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Bạn có thể sửa đoạn văn lại cho tôi không?

Can you rewrite the paragraph for me?

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'd like to tutor young children in the orphanage. I want to do that because I will be able to help them read and write fluently. That can bring them happiness and help them have the good knowledge to get the good life. I will ask my friend to help me. We will instruct children to do their homework at the weekend or in our free time.

It would be my dream come true if I had a chance to tutor those ùnortunate youngster in the orphanage. The ultimate reason for this act is that I want to deliver my knowledge to them, teach them the necessary skills for life and express my empathy to the unfortunate. To make it happen, my assistant or partner would be my best friend, whom I know so well and with whom I can collaborate anytime efficiently. Whenever we have some freetime or at weekends, we will head to the orphanage and help them by starting with their homework first. I am looking forward to this occasion!

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Unfortunate :3 sorry i messed up a bit

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It is Okay. Are you Vietnamese?

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Thank you for your answer! =D

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Yes, I am. My facebook is Trương Kim Chi. Contact me if you want :3

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OK. Tôi cũng là người Việt