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Question

In my opinion, reading is good leisure activity for teenager. Firstly, it help us acquire a lot of new knowledge. Secondly, reading book hepls us free entertaiment and stress reduction after every school day. In addiction, there are some books such as English books,... also help us expand our vocabulary. In short, reading is good activity. But we should choose books that read and read at reasonable time.

Answer 1

In my opinion, reading is a good leisure activity for teenager. Firstly, it helps us to acquire a lot of  lots new knowledge. Secondly, reading book provides us free entertaiment and reduces stress reduction after every school day. In addiction, there are some books such as English books,... also help us expand our vocabulary. In short, reading is a good activity. But we should choose books that read ( Read what?) and read at reasonable time.

 

Answer 2

- Comment:

+ I advise you to rephrase the word "help" --> repetitive

+ Another one, if you want to achieve score in lexical resource, I advise you to learn some opening phrase in order to attract readers.

+ In overall, your essay is quite perfect !!!!

From my perspective, reading is a great leisure activity for teenagers. The main reason why I believe reading is beneficial is that it helps us acquire a myriad of brand-new knowledges and theories. Another reason why I support the notion is that reading books can absolutely provide us free entertainment and alleviate stress effectively after every school days. In addition, there are some books such as English books,... also make it easy for us to expand our vocabulary. In short, reading is a good activity. However, we should be wise to choose books in order to read and at a reasonable time.

Answer 3

hepls -> provides
(In overall, your essay is quite good)

 

Answer 4

1. You wrote: ...n, reading is good leisure activity for teenager. Firstly, it help us acquire a lot of n...

Feedback: The article is missing before the noun: "a teenager", "the teenager". (ART015)

Error type: Article and uncountable noun error

Suggestion: a teenager, the teenager

 

2. You wrote: ...sure activity for teenager. Firstly, it help us acquire a lot of new knowledge. Seco...

Feedback: Your subject is singular but your verb is conjugated for a plural subject. Did you mean "helps"?

Error type: Verb agreement error

Suggestion: helps

 

3. You wrote: ...f new knowledge. Secondly, reading book hepls us free entertaiment and stress reducti...

Feedback: Possible spelling mistake found

Error type: Possible Typo

Suggestion: helps, heels, heals, hep ls

 

4. You wrote: ...e. Secondly, reading book hepls us free entertaiment and stress reduction after every school...

Feedback: Possible spelling mistake found

Error type: Possible Typo

Suggestion: entertainment