Ielts task 1 Map

Question

The pictures illustrate the changes in way to go to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. In general, there were some developments in infrastructure after 3 years, which linkeđ the road process together

 

As can be seen from the maps, getting to the Hospital City could be achieved by going through the City Road, the Hospital Rd and the Ring Road respectively. In 2007, the area didn’t have a various traffic systems as it was in 2010. Specifically, six bus stops were located along the Hospital Rd, of which also had a car park for staff and public on the right. 

 

While 2007 saw a simple system to get to the City hospital, some transformations could be observed on the same process in 2010. Initially, six small bus stops turn into one large bus station, which associated with two ends of the Hospital Rd Road. Moreover, there was an additional car park on the right of the Ring Road for public, which means the old car park was used for staff. Another change in 2010 road process was the introduction of two rotary at two ends of the Hospital Rd Road. The roundabouts linked the three roads and the bus stop together, which made direction become diverse when coming through.

 

Above all, the way to get to the Hospital City stayed unchanged after three years but also had some developments in infrastructure system during this period.

Answer 1

1. You wrote: ... in infrastructure after 3 years, which linkeđ the road process together As can be...

Feedback: Possible spelling mistake found

Error type: Possible Typo

Suggestion: linked, linker

 

2. You wrote: ...e process in 2010. Initially, six small bus stops turn into one large bus station, ...

Feedback: The noun "bus" is countable and there are six of them, so use a plural form here. Revise: "buses", "busses".

Error type: Quantifier error

Suggestion: buses, busses

 

3. You wrote: ...in 2010. Initially, six small bus stops turn into one large bus station, which assoc...

Feedback: You have used a bare infinitive where a gerund is needed. Did you mean "stops turning"? (xx)

Error type: Gerund error

Suggestion: stops turning