Writa about your favorite film

Question

There are many interesting films but I think "Just one smile is very alluring" is the best.
"Just one smile is very alluring" is a romantic film, which was directed by Lin Yufen. It is adapted from the novel of the same name by Gu Man. It stars Yang Yang and Zheng Shuang.
The film is about the love story of Xiao Nai and Wei Wei. Xiao Nai is a fourth year student and Wei Wei is a second year student. Xiao Nai is also the CEO of Zhi Yi technology company, he is the most popular student because he is well-versed in both arts and sports. Wei Wei placed second in beauty voting that took place online within the student community. Known by the name "Yixiao Naihe", Xiao Nai is the top player in the game "A Chinese Ghost Story". He suggested Wei Wei get married within the game to participate in a couple competition because Wei Wei is known by the name " Luwei Weiwei", who is the only female player in the top 10 PK ranking . However, Wei Wei never expected the real identity of "Yixiao Naihe", who is described as the cream of the crop in both sports and academics. When Wei Wei discovers his true identity, they have already fallen in love. Together, they overcome numerous misunderstanding and obstacles standing in their relationship. At the end, they get married and have a happy life.
Critics say it is a must-see film. I agree with them because the story is gripping and the star is very nice. The special effects, visuals and music are also incredible. Go and see if you can

Answer 1

There are many interesting films but I think "Just one smile is very alluring" is the best.
"Just one smile is very alluring" is a romantic film, which was directed by Lin Yufen. It is adapted from the novel of the same name by Gu Man. It stars Yang Yang and Zheng Shuang.
The film is about the love story of Xiao Nai and Wei Wei. Xiao Nai is a fourth year   senior student and Wei Wei is a second year sophomore student. Xiao Nai is also the CEO of Zhi Yi technology company, . He he is the most popular student because he is well-versed in both arts and sports. Wei Wei placed the second in beauty voting that took place online within the student community. Known by the name "Yixiao Naihe", Xiao Nai is the top player in the game "A Chinese Ghost Story". He suggested Wei Wei to get married within the game to participate in a couple competition because Wei Wei is known by the name " Luwei Weiwei", who is the only female player in the top 10 PK ranking . However, Wei Wei never expected the real identity of "Yixiao Naihe", who is described as the cream of the crop in both sports and academics. When Wei Wei discovers his true identity, they have already fallen in love. Together, they overcome numerous misunderstanding and obstacles standing in their relationship. At the end, they get married and have a happy life.
Critics say it is a must-see film. I agree with them because the story is gripping and the star is very nice. The special effects, visuals and music are also incredible. Go and see if you can.

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Answer 2

Go and see if you can sounds a little bit weird

focus more on your tense because it is hard for me to understand clearly