Physical exercises are very useful to our health.

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Nowadays,a lot of people are doing physical exercises.The reason why people are doing physical exercises,in some way,is that it is very useful.First and foremost,doing physical exercises keeps us fit and prevents us from overweight.A reseach showed that doing exercises helps you burn the calories faster and so that you also can lose weight if you do physical exercises regularly.Furthermore,doing physical exercises keeps us always being healthy .Physical exersices not only prevents us from lots of dieases such as heart dieases,lung dieases,.. but also mantain healthy bones,smooth skin, beauty,..So that, we can live longer because of good health.Moreover,physical exercises slows down the aging.We can easily see that a lot of celebrities is doing physical exercises now and although they are forty now,they look like twenty!

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