Bài IELTS Task 2 ngày 28/05/2016

Question

It is widely believed that the admiration young people hold for stars in the fields of media and sports gain popularity though they do not display perfect role model. In my opinion this development might both be positive and negative.

On the one hand, under the influx of media and sports celebrities who do not set role model have an undersiable influence on young adults who are not mature enough to judge what is suitable and proper in their society. Firstly, from fashion perspective, it engenders an incorrect awareness  of  youths’ style.    some celebrities wear sex-arousing costumes on the stage to attract audience’s attention as a way to enhance their reputation, which motivates them to show propensity for changing pattern of fashion follow what those stars dress, even if their costumes go against the cultural value and indigeneous practices of some localities. In addition, as a consequence of being attracted to media and sports celebrated individuals have an adverse impact on the academic performance of adolescents, even have the tendency to react against learning.

On the other hand, many celebrities whose accomplishment make excellent role modes for young people. Firstly, they demonstrate great effort determination and ambition, which is required for someone who wants to be truly successful in their chosen field. Secondly, young adults are more likely to be highly motivated to realize their dream, when the young consider famous entertainment stars to be model to follow, they would realize that they might develop oneself  talents through application and perseverance.

In conclusion, stars involved in media and sports often show behave in a nonstandard manner. However. I am in opinion that they have positive influences on certain circumstances.

Answer 1

It is widely believed that the admiration young people hold for stars in the fields of media and sports gain popularity though they do not display perfect role models. In my opinion, this development might both be positive and negative.

On the one hand, under the influx of media and sports celebrities who do not set role model have an undesirable influence on young adults who are not mature enough to judge what is suitable and proper in their society. Firstly, from the fashion perspective, it engenders an incorrect awareness of youths’ style.    some celebrities wear sex-arousing costumes on the stage to attract audience’s attention as a way to enhance their reputation, which motivates them to show a propensity for changing pattern of fashion follow what those stars dress, even if their costumes go against the cultural value and indigeneous practices of some localities. In addition, as a consequence of being attracted to media and sports celebrated individuals have an adverse impact on the academic performance of adolescents, even have the tendency to react against learning.

On the other hand, there are many celebrities whose accomplishments make excellent role modes for young people. Firstly, they demonstrate great effort determination and ambition, which is required for someone who wants to be truly successful in their chosen field. Secondly, young adults are more likely to be highly motivated to realize their dream, when the young consider famous entertainment stars to be models to follow, they would realize that they might develop oneself talents through application and perseverance.

In conclusion, stars involved in media and sports often show to behave in a nonstandard manner. However. I am in the opinion that they have positive influences on certain circumstances.