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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 

 

Some people believe that despite the spreading popularity of the online media, traditional newspaper will still hold the most vital position among news readers. In my perspective, I completely disagree with this opinion.

Firstly, it is true that online news more convenient than newspapers. The main benefit of online news is that it allows us much faster access to news in real time and wherever we are on different mobile devices. In contrast, buying printed journalism take time to go a new stand. For instance, if people is outside and want to know about "Brexit Event", they can use their smartphone to find this which do not waste much time to go to the bookshop and buy a newspaper.

Secondly, another key benefit of the online news compared to newspapers is the ability to update the newest information worldwide constantly. Daily, there are many events uploaded to the Internet , people can use electrical devices to search information by a click. In contrast, printed papers take time to printing or distributing, thus the amount of information in newspapers is limited. 

Finally, it is easy for reader to preserve and retrieve old news. By google search, internet users can find any information or historical event that occurred before. In contrast, it is hard to store and search for previous news on printed newspapers. Storage traditional papers required a massive space which is exert pernicious effects on the environment.

In conclusion, I disagree with the view that newspapers will continue to be the main source of news, because I believe that the Internet will soon be equally important. 

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Chào bạn nhìn chung bài viết của bạn ổn nhưng còn một vài lỗi cần được sửa 

"is exerted" , "serach for information", " to print"

Ngoài ra nếu bạn muốn nâng band điểm của mình thì bạn nên hạn chế dùng "I" ,"there are", "it is"  Ví dụ

"it is true that online news more convenient than newspapers" đổi thành "online news play an important role in updating lastest news which are able to access by different moblie devices"

Giúp sửa bài mình nha cám ơnhttp://chuawritingmienphi.com/index.php/7925/bai-ietls-task-2-languages-and-culture 

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