Advantages of wearing school uniforms

Question

I think wearing school uniforms has many advantages. To begin with, wearing uniforms encourages students to be proud of their schools. Secondly, wearing uniforms will help students not being rich and poor discrimination. Rich or poor students are required to wear the same clothes to school. Besides, wearing school uniforms is practical. First, it saves time, you don't have to think of what to wear everyday and this will help students concentrate on learning. Second, it saves money. Students will not spend too much money to buying clothes because they just have two outfit for a year. What's more, secondary school students should wear uniforms.

Answer 1

I think wearing school uniform has many advantages. To begin with, wearing uniforms encourages students to be proud of their schools. Secondly, uniform ( lặp ) uniforms will help students (lặp) children not being rich and poor discrimination. Rich and poor students are required to wear the same clothes to school.  (diễn đạt) not feeling discriminate about their backgound when all the rich and poor are required to wear the same clothes at school.

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Moreover, wearing school uniform is practical. It is time-saving since you do not (không viết tắt) have to think of what to wear everyday, which may help you concentrating on learning. It is also economical because you only need two outfit for the whole year. In conclusion, I think that school uniform must be compulsory.

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