Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solution would you suggest? Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. T

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The damage of tobacco has almost known clearly through media, and internet. It pollutes the environment and carious serious healthy for not only smokers but also non-smokers. It is also a sad fact one in five teenagers take up the habit when they are as young as 11. Unfortunately, there is one interest group, the tobacco business, which is more than happy with our addiction to cigarettes which bring many profits for them. Date to date, researchers and organizations who usually give evidence damage of tobacco, which noticed that have linking between smoking and cancer, heart disease and other serious illnesses, and especially for non-smokers who called with a name on passive-smoking. One particular example for this situation: the EPA (Environmental Protection Agency) release a long-awaited report on passive smoking, they resulted that Passive smoking causes 3000 deaths a year from lung cancer in the US alone. Moreover, smoking is an expensive habit, its representative huge cost for society. Government and individual have to paid for buying cigarette and treating smoking-diseases, this money may be used for better purposes such as: paying for adapt climate change methods research, helping to feed the world’s poor people. However, following give-up smokers quantity statistics in many years, they resulted that is not decrease much lower than our expectance and especially, almost people in 11-19 years old who cannot give up. The obvious answer is that cigarettes are highly addictive, so that it extremely difficult to live without them. I also absolutely agree with Vietnam government on increasing tobacco’s tax, banning cigarette advertising, forbidding smoke in public area, organizing damage of tobacco communications. If people want to quit smoke, they need to have patience, determination and their family’s support and encouragement. We live on modern society with many new dangerous ills and serious pollution environment. Solving the damage of tobacco is not only responsible of government but also individual. These actions bring fresh and bright home for our children’s children.

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The damage of tobacco has almost been known clearly or has been obvous through/ via media, and internet. It pollutes the environment and caries serious healthy ( wrong word) illness/diseases for not only smokers but also non-smokers. It is also a sad fact that one in five teenagers takes up the habit when he/she is as young as 11. Unfortunately, there is one interest group, the tobacco business, which is more than happy with our addiction to cigarettes (???) ( wrong structure) which bring many profits for them. Date to date, researchers and organizations who usually give evidence on damage of tobacco, which noticed that there is a link/connection between smoking and cancer, heart disease and other serious illnesses, and especially for non-smokers who called with a name on passive-smoking. One particular example for this situation: the EPA (Environmental Protection Agency) release a long-awaited report on passive smoking, they resulted that Passive smoking causes 3000 deaths a year from lung cancer in the US alone. Moreover, smoking is an expensive habit, its representative huge cost (???) for society. Government and individual have to pay for buying cigarettes and treating smoking-diseases.

 

 

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THE money may be used for better purposes such as: paying for THE RESEARCH ON METHODS IN ORDER TO  adapt TO climate change, helping to feed the world’s poor people.IN ADDITION, ACCORDING TO give-up smokers quantity statistics in many years, they CONCLUDE that is not a MUCH LOWER decrease  than our expectance and especially, almost people in 11-19 years old cannot give up. The obvious answer is that cigarettes are highly addictive, hence it IS extremely difficult  FOR THE SMOKERS to live without them. I also absolutely agree with Vietnam government on increasing tobacco’s tax, banning cigarette advertising, forbidding smokING in public areaS, organizing PROPAGANDA OF THE damage of tobacco . If people want to quit smoke, they need to have patience, determination and their family’s support and encouragement. We live on modern society with many new dangerous ills and seriousLY ENVIRONMENTAL pollution. Solving the damage of tobacco is not only responsibILITY NOT ONLY of government but also individual. These actions bring fresh and bright home for our children’s children.

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