Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree and disagree ?

Question

It is true that the equality between men and women is widely recognized in universities. While I accept that students of the two genders should be given the same access to many subjects, I believe that the university authorities should regulate the relational number between them in certain study areas.

On the one hand, universities should balance the number of genders in most classes for some reasons. Firstly, study ability is almost in the same level  between men and women. In fact, women can even do better than men do when they hold high positions like monitors, leaders of teams. Secondly, classes with the variety of people in many aspects, including sex, allow students to enhance their social skills . If learners only go to single sex classes, they probably lack some basic knowledge about the other gender. Also, they do not have chance to expose to the half of the world, which can lead to either inappropriate behaviour or unexpected misunderstanding in the future.

On the other hand, a range of subjects requires a limitation on the size of one sex compared to the other to ensure an appropriate curriculum. Men and women are different in characteristics that suit distinct tasks so that some study programs are better applied for one sex. Therefore, the idea of balancing the two genders in these classes is contrary to science. For example, men are likely to be more prominent at gymnastics than women are. If schools allow students to freely register these subjects, there will be a number of female students who are not eligible but just interested in this sport enroll the class and cannot finish the studying.

In conclusion, although the thought of allowing the same number of men and women register some classes is right, I believe that in some cases, this rate should be adjusted.

Answer 1

It is true that the equality between men and women is widely recognized in universities

It is true that là một cụm từ mạnh, chỉ sự thật hoàn toàn. Ở đây bạn viết là “the equality between men and women is widely recognized in universities” liệu tất cả các trường đều như thế không nên bạn không nên viết như vậy

Theo mình , mình sẽ viết như thế này, dù không perfect bạn tham khảo xem nhé : It is believed that universities should admit equal propotions of each gender in every university subject.I n my opinion, I disagree with this idea for  some of the reasons mentioned below.

Theo mình bài này là agree hay disagree, và lại đây lại là một vấn đề “ impractical and impossible to do” nên  mình nghĩ bạn nên viết là disagree sẽ hay hơn

Body 1:- unrealistic.

             - Some courses are more popular for boys than for girls. For example, some technical fields will attract more boys than girls, difficult for university to recruit enough students.

 

- base the admission on each gender is unfair, should select the best candidates based on their qualifications, give them opportunity to persue their dream, achieve their goal

 

 

 

Comments

your ideas is clearer.

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Tks for ur ideas