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MÌNH ĐANG HỌC IELTS ĐỂ SĂN HỌC BỔNG, MÌNH HY VỌNG BÀI NÀY CỦA MÌNH SẼ ĐƯỢC BAND 8, CÁC BẠN GÓP Ý CHO MÌNH VỚI NHÉ, CÁM ƠN CÁC BẠN NHIỀU

Some people believe that teachers should be replaced and computers should be widely used in education. However, others think teachers play an important role. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

people have different views about the role of teachers in schools. While there are benefits to using computers in some certain courses , i would argue that it might be better to have a teacher in class.

On one hand, using computers in schools instead of teachers is benificial in some ways.firstly, there are a large amount of information  stored in computers, and students can find almost all kinds of resources on the internet.by  using these devices in education, the young can study more productively,and their results will be improved significantly.secondly,when running a computer in class, it is working automatically without any help of people, schools will therefore need less teachers to look after students.as a result,  a great deal of money will be saved by cutting salaries which pay for teachers.in ABC university, for example,there are some automatic computers which use to notify students about exams or schedules without lecturers in class.

On the other hand,I would argue that teachers have an essential role in schools, so they can not be replaced.first,devices which teach students are not human. It therefore can not understand what young people need, and can not explain all kinds of questions relating to family or friendship.furthemore, schools should provide learners with real life experience rather than just knowledge . if there are teachers in class, learners will have a chance to gain more information about what they absolutely need for their future careers. This can make them feel  exciting in class, which is a positive impact of teaching.

In conclusion, it is sometimes argued that schools should use computers as a major way of teaching.however, I believe that  teachers play an important role in education, and they have a  greater impact on young people.

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Mình thấy bài viết của bạn có ý rồi, mình bổ sung thêm vài ý với sửa mấy lỗi nhỏ

devices which teach students are not human -> devices cannot interact with students, it does not know how to motivate as well as inspire the students to learn.

On one hand -> On the one hand

Can not -> Cannot

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cám ơn bạn, giờ mới biết có dạng cannot, nhưng can not vẫn chấp nhận được nhé, hihi

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