The maps below show how the town of harborne changes from 1936 to 2007.

Question

The maps below illustrate reveal changes that had occurred in the town of harborne between 1936 and 2007.

 

Overall, the town had been more modernized over the period of the time considering there were more buidlings and cutting out some of the natural beauty. Bank, post ofice, and library were the only constructions which remained there.

 

From 1936 to 2007, the are around the river was developed into a residential area in the northeastern part of the city. In the northwest most trees were cut down.

 

In the center of the town, a new shopping center had been established. The sweet shop and butchers were replaced with a  supermarket. Across from the post office. a flower shop were transformed into a travel agency. In the southwest, the cycle were converted into a road while in the southeast the government offices were redesigned into a museum and farmland became a golf course

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The maps below illustrate reveal changes ( không nên dùng thế này bạn nhé không có dạng hai động từ illustrate & reveal đi với nhau đâu) that had occurred in the town of harborne between 1936 and 2007.

 Overall, the town had been more modernized over the period of the time considering there were more buidlings building and cutting out some of the natural beauty. Bank, post ofice, and library were the only constructions which remained there. 
Mình viết lại mở bài hộ bạn theo cách ngắn gọn hơn: The provided maps reveal some striking similarities in the town of harborne over a period of 71 years between 1936 and 2007. At first glance it is clear that Harborne has undergone significant developments with more buildings contructed and some of them still remained up to 2007. 
 From 1936 to 2007, the are (mình không hiểu lắm ý bạn muốn diễn đạt là gì) around the river was developed into a residential area in the northeastern part of the city. In the northwest most trees were cut down.

 In the center of the town, a new shopping center had been established. The sweet shop and butchers were replaced with a  supermarket. Across from the post office. a flower shop were transformed into a travel agency. In the southwest, the cycle were converted into a road while in the southeast the government offices were redesigned into a museum and farmland became a golf course

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