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Đoạn 1 các ý trình bày logic, nhiều từ hay
Protecting wild animals is a global problems in the world.However, some people argue that it is pointless to spend time and money on saving games ( chắc là định viết them :)), which bring no value to human beings. From my viewpoints, I strongly disagree with this opinion.
Firstly, from the biological aspect, animals are one of significant chains in promoting biodiversity. If wildlife suffers from any profound effects ( tớ thấy cụm này chưa rõ ý), the delicate balance of the ecosystem will be disrupted, which will lead to devastating disasters. For instance, when snakes are in danger of extinction because of hunting, the number of rats will grow up greatly. Obviously, they will become obsession of famers during havest time. In other words, if any species become extinct, the food chain will be disturbted affecting all the species. This leads to the lack of food to supply for people. For this reason, biodiveristy conservation is one of main reasons why we sould (should) protect wildlife.
Moreover, human safeguard the natural habit ( habitat) of wildlife species, which means that they save the future generations in other words, human survival. Most scientistS believe that these habitats are crucial for human lives. For example, forests absorb carbon dioxide, produce oxygen and stabilize the Earth’s climate. If people destroyed rainforests, the costs of managing climate changes would far outweigh the costs of conversation . By protecting wildlife populations and their habits, people maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth. ( tớ nghĩ sẽ liên quan và thuyết phục hơn nếu đoạn này cậu thêm ý " protecting wildanimals including protecting their habitat' rồi cậu nêu ra " benefit of natural habitat)
To sum up, in my opinion, people should do as much as they can to ensure the lives of wild animals. Particularly, human and wildlife should live in in peace with each other.
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