Nowadays ( Tuyệt đối đừng dùng từ này trong bài Writing bạn có thể thay bằng từ academic hơn ví dụ như "today" hay "these days"), we cannot deny the contribution of universities to our society. However, what universities should to their students remains to be a controversial (không nên lạm dụng từ này trong tất cả hoàn cảnh nó có thể khiến bạn mất điểm oan chỉ dùng từ này khi nói về vấn đề gây nhức nhối ví dụ như tội phạm, nạo phá thai chẳng hạn, nên thay từ này bằng từ "debatable") topic. Some people argue that colleges are the places providing learners with both academic knowledge and working skills, meanwhile, there are people said the main task of professionals ( theo mình nghĩ thay bằng "professors" hay hơn) in the lecture halls is only to give the major’s (major chứ nhỉ) lessons. In my opinion, job-related knowledge and skills should bothly be the main focus of universities.
These days, one of the most concern matters in our contemporary life is the main fuction of universities. Some people argue that the bachelors are supposed to be provided just knowledge, other, however, assert that they are recommended to be given practical skills in addition. I find the latter view is more convincing for following reasons.
First, it is obvious that the number of graduates who are unemployment ( thay bằng unemployed ) in some countries is increasing considerably. One of the main reasons for this situation is the lack of necessary soft skill, whereas the main purpose of students when entering the universities is to gain the practical knowledge and skills to be qualified at the job market. Therefore, for the sake of graduates as well as the market, colleges should consider soft skills to be included in the education program.
Second, focusing on the job-relating skills can benefits the university itself. This is because how many students get the job after receiving bachelor degree makes credit and fame for this universities. If one university ranks higher than others in the rate of getting-job graduate, it certainly impresses the society and attracts more freshmens in the new school years as well.
To sum up, universities nowadays should consider major’s knowledge and soft skills equally. Only by doing so, can universities gurantee the high rate of employment and emphasize their quality in educating.
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