The free movement of goods to developing countries leads to significant changes of economy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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With the outstanding development of commerce, the free movement of goods is goal of many countries in trading. An argument stated that it can lead to significant changes of business. To give a broader perspective, there are moderate altercations in economy.

Firstly, having a widen market is considered to be the first positive change in trading, because goods are sold in other countries with lot of preference such as untaxed, preferential price. Therefore, the more other countries's products are designed, the more people buy it. Some famous brands are able to open their market to increase the number of clients. Besides, more chances are given for developing countries. They will be received lot of supports and aids by wealthy nations. For example, cafe, which is exported by Vietnam, is common choice of many people. The reason is cheap price and cafe has good smell and taste. By supporting of other countries, vietnam's cafe can be sold in supermarkets with reasonable price, so that cafe is cost-effective for agriculture's exportation. Totally, the free movement of goods leads to positive changes in business.

However, it also has a negative effect in trading of every nations, specially the developing countries. New products which have bad quality is sold publicly without government' s controls. It can be jeopardized to health of consumers also damaged the original. The consequence is these products is imported and have bargain price, so that people often choose them. More dangerously, the international brands occupy overwhelmingly markets, which undermine the development of new brands. The public tend to buy goods of famous brands and indifferent with the new brands. Overall, the free movement of goods affect negatively in the trading of many countries.

To sum up, in case of the free movement of goods, the alternation is inevitable. However, the changes influent negatively and positive in economic field of each country. The government is advised to enact law to manipulate the trading.
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Your essay is good and well-organized, just 

Be careful with some small grammaticl mistakes

You should use more synonyms to get higher score

With the outstanding development of commerce, the free movement (= delivery) of goods is goal of many countries in trading. An argument stated that it can lead to significant (substantial/considerable) changes of business. To give a broader perspective, there are moderate altercations in economy.

Firstly, having a widen market is considered to be the first positive change in trading, because goods are sold in other countries with lot of preference such as untaxed, preferential price. Therefore, the more other countries's products are designed (this sentence should: the more products are various) , the more people buy it. Some famous brands are able to open their market to increase the number of clients. Besides, more chances are given for developing countries. They will be received lot of supports and aids by wealthy nations. For example, cafe, which is exported by Vietnam, is common choice of many people. The reason is (that price is cheap) cheap price and cafe has good smell and taste. By supporting of other countries, vietnam's cafe can be sold (comsumed) in supermarkets with reasonable price, so that cafe is cost-effective for agricultural exportation. Totally, the free movement of goods leads to positive changes in business.

However, it also has a negative effects in trading of every nations, specially the developing countries. New products which have bad quality are sold publicly without government' s controls. It can be jeopardized to health of consumers also damaged the original. The consequence is these products are imported and have bargain price, so that people often choose them. More dangerously, the international brands occupy overwhelmingly markets, which undermine the development of new brands. The public tend to buy goods of famous brands and indifferent with the new brands. Overall, the free movement of goods affects negatively in the trading of many countries.

To sum up, in case of the free movement of goods, the alternation is inevitable. However, the changes influent negatively and positively in economic field of each country. The government is advised to enact law to manipulate the trading.

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