ietls task 2 unhealthy lifestyle

Question

Some people say in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others say that it is easy to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss these views and give your own  opinions

Nowadays, human beings has had living  condition much better than the previous generations. Despite the fact that, modern lives causes more issues people must tackle with, in particular, unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has enormous influences on not just a person but also society .

Most people find it easier to have a good living  way. As the speed of lives is faster and faster, people seems to hungrier and hungrier. They do everything as quickly as possible so as to keep up with rapid changes of world. Thus, it is straightforward when most of personnel are willing to order pizza boxes by phone rather than go shopping and enjoy a delicious home-cooked meal, because of the simple reason that they are afraid of wasting their time. The same daily saving-time activities gradually form bad hibits, in other world, unhealthy lifestyle

On the other hand, some people believe that a modern life gives them more chances to stay fit and healthy. It is easy  to search gym and fitness centers with the advanced equipments and spend one to two hours to do exercises. In additon to, people can attain a great deal of useful informaiton about  nutrious food by the way of social media such as Internet, radio, TV, newspapers and so on.

In conclusion,although people understand the importance of healthy lifestyle , owning that depends on individual behaviours as well as conscience. It is not difficult to avoid bad habits if people have strong determination to make changes towards positive ways.

Answer 1

-modern lives=> modern live/ life

not just a person but also society => not only a person but also society

Most people find it easier to have a good living  way => On the one hand/ To begin with, most people find it is easier to have a good living way

 As the speed of lives is faster and faster, people seems to hungrier and hungrier => The faster the speed of lives is, the hungrier people seem to be.

 with the advanced equipments and spend one to two hours to do exercises. => with the advanced equipments and spend one to two hours DOING exercises.

 In additon to