A controvertible (mình nghĩ phải là controversial question) question about whether death penalty is executed as an appropriate penalty for delinquent has attracted many disparate appreciation of public opinion. From my perspective, I am completely inclined to approve of the fact that death sentences which regarded as one of the most debated in term of law, theology, ethnics and sociology should be enforced for felony. This essay will present the explanations to support my attitude more convincing for following arguments. Mình nghĩ câu này bạn viết khá dài dòng.
In the first place To begin with, capital punishment which is accomplished according to a legal process for law violators is considered as the most effective punishment to prevent sin in the world. Not only does death penalty abandon the idea of infringing the law and order for those with criminal intentions, but it is also threatens perpetrators so that (so that + clause nhe bạn) inclined them to the good and amended their conduct by surrendering before law for leniency due to its harshness. Obviously, to illustrate this idea more clearer with a compelling fact that there are more than 60% population of the world live in countries where death sentences has been implemented, and so does four populous country in the world ( China, India, USA and Indonesia).
In addition to the first argument, it is absolutely undeniable that the death penalty is a penalty towards an equitable society: law breakers incur pertinent punishment for heinously committing a crime. In the same way, it is similar to a tradition rule: ‘’ eye to eye, tooth to tooth’’ which means bringing justice to humanity. Alternatively, Immanuel Kant once said that not any punishments others than capital punishment does have the ability to satisfy justice. Therefore, the death sentence is definitely the only answer not only for maintaining security society but also for avoiding offender.
Last but not least, capital punishment has abundantly inhibited the recidivism of the particularly high dangerous delinquents so that as (so that +clause) to ensure the safety of society. Nevertheless, some people has a suspicion arises that if law violators are released from prison, criminals could put the law in force or break the regulation again.
For all the aforementioned arguments above, I totally believed that death sentences can be executed as accurate regulation for felony. Briefly, death penalty has preserved the security society and chasten the abominable perpetrators so that it is unlikely to cross out in the near future. What will happen to the security society without capital punishment?(Ý kiến cá nhân của mình là không đặt câu hỏi cuối bài thế này)
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