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Question

“Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up”

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

FATHERHOOD AND MOTHERHOOD

In the past, everyone had a hard bias that the women were responsible for taking and raising the children. Today, the stand between males and females is equal leads to the responsibility for their children is resemble.

Traditionally, the mothers were pressured to stay at home and bringing the children up while the men didn’t have to care about the family. As a consequence of this wrong attitude, the women had a hard time to take care both the home the the children as well as the children couldn’t know about the fatherly love and didn’t close to their father.

Nowadays, women have taken work in every field thus their stand is higher in the society. However, they still have to take care the house and their children as well as work at the same time. Owing to this position, the men are also responsible to share the childcare and the housework.

Moreover, the magnitude of the parents is unable to be denied. Every child needs both the mother hood and the fatherhood. If the motherhood gives them the loves and cares then from their father they have a strong place to depend on. An action from the parents such as take the children go out for a play, film, a sport match or eating with them make them know that they are loved and from here, their soul are brought up perfectly beautifully.

In a nutshell, it is worth sharing parenting responsibility among mother and father to provide a brighter future for their children.

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Answer 1

In the past, everyone had a hard bias that the women were responsible for taking and raising the children. Today, the stand between males and females is equal leads  to the responsibility for their children is resemble.

Traditionally, the mothers were pressured to stay at home and bringing the children up while the men didn’t have to care about the family. As a consequence of this wrong attitude, the women had a hard time to take care (of) both the home the the children as well as(??) the children couldn’t know about the fatherly love and didn’t close to (be+close) their father.

Nowadays, women have taken work in every field thus their stand is higher in the society. However, they still have to take care the house and their children as well as work at the same time. Owing to this position, the men are also responsible to (for sharing)share the childcare and the housework.

Moreover, the magnitude of the parents is unable to be denied. Every child needs both the mother hood and the fatherhood. If the motherhood gives them the loves and cares then from their father they have a strong place to depend on. An action from the parents such as take(taking) the children (xx)go out for a play, film, a sport match or eating with them make them know that they are loved and from here, their soul  are (is) brought up perfectly beautifully.

 

 

Answer 2

In the past, everyone had a hard bias that the women were responsible for taking and raising the children. Today, the stand between males and females is equal leads  to the responsibility for their children is resemble.

Traditionally, the mothers were pressured to stay at home and bringing the children up while the men didn’t have to care about the family. As a consequence of this wrong attitude, the women had a hard time to take care (of) both the home the the children as well as(??) the children couldn’t know about the fatherly love and didn’t close to (be+close) their father.

Nowadays, women have taken work in every field thus their stand is higher in the society. However, they still have to take care the house and their children as well as work at the same time. Owing to this position, the men are also responsible to (for sharing)share the childcare and the housework.

Moreover, the magnitude of the parents is unable to be denied. Every child needs both the mother hood and the fatherhood. If the motherhood gives them the loves and cares then from their father they have a strong place to depend on. An action from the parents such as take(taking) the children (xx)go out for a play, film, a sport match or eating with them make them know that they are loved and from here, their soul  are (is) brought up perfectly beautifully.

Answer 3

Mình thấy bạn vẫn còn mắc lỗi về cấu trúc câu: take care of, responsible for, such as: Ving,.. Ngoài ra bạn hạn chế dùng phrasal verb đi nhé

In the past, everyone had a hard bias that the women were responsible for taking and raising the children. Today, the stand between males and females is equal leads  to the responsibility for their children is resemble.

Traditionally, the mothers were pressured to stay at home and bringing the children up while the men didn’t have to care about the family. As a consequence of this wrong attitude, the women had a hard time to take care (of) both the home the the children as well as(??) the children couldn’t know about the fatherly love and didn’t close to (be+close) their father.

Nowadays, women have taken work in every field thus their stand is higher in the society. However, they still have to take care the house and their children as well as work at the same time. Owing to this position, the men are also responsible to (for sharing)share the childcare and the housework.

Moreover, the magnitude of the parents is unable to be denied. Every child needs both the mother hood and the fatherhood. If the motherhood gives them the loves and cares then from their father they have a strong place to depend on. An action from the parents such as take (taking) the children (xx)go out for a play, film, a sport match or eating with them make them know that they are loved and from here, their soul  are (is) brought up perfectly beautifully.

Answer 4

In the past, everyone had a hard bias that the women were responsible for taking and raising the children. Today, the stand between males and females is equal leads  to the responsibility for their children is resemble.

Traditionally, the mothers were pressured to stay at home and bringing the children up while the men didn’t have to care about the family. As a consequence of this wrong attitude, the women had a hard time to take care (of) both the home the the children as well as(??) the children couldn’t know about the fatherly love and didn’t close to (be+close) their father.

Nowadays, women have taken work in every field thus their stand is higher in the society. However, they still have to take care the house and their children as well as work at the same time. Owing to this position, the men are also responsible to (for sharing)share the childcare and the housework.

Moreover, the magnitude of the parents is unable to be denied. Every child needs both the mother hood and the fatherhood. If the motherhood gives them the loves and cares then from their father they have a strong place to depend on. An action from the parents such as take(taking) the children (xx)go out for a play, film, a sport match or eating with them make them know that they are loved and from here, their soul  are (is) brought up perfectly beautifully.