Ielts Task 1 - 14/12- the charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990,2000,2010

Question

The three charts reveal the different degrees granted by the National University in three years 1990, 2000, 2010. The fields of study described are Computer Science, Medicine, Business and Law. The percentage of the total degrees granted for each field changes over the three years shown.

In general, there were some fluctuations in the percentage of each field from 1990 to 2010. Another interesting point is that the Computer Science became the most popular study while the Business turned into the least favorite one over 10 years.

In 1990, the Computer Science and Business were the two most attractive fields of study, 30% degrees were granted for these fields. Meanwhile the Medicine accounted for 25% and the remaining 15% was the Law.

The year 2000 witnessed some changes in percentage of degrees. In one hand, the Computer Science and Medicine gained 10% and 5% of degrees granted respectively. In the other hand, the Business dropped to 20% and the Law also fell to 10%.

In 2010, the Computer Science continued to earn greater percentage of students with 45% degrees in this field. The same trend was with the Law when it increased to 15 %. The Medicine and Business, in contrast, expericened a downward trend, declining to 25% and 15% respectively.

Answer 1

-t nghĩ viết thế này có vẻ đỡ rời rạc hơn.

The three charts reveal the different degrees granted by the National University  over three separate years, namely 1990, 2000 and 2010

-Mình nghĩ " downward trend" thì hay dùng cho line grarph và bar chart.

In 2010, the Computer Science continued to earn greater percentage of students with 45% degrees in this field. 

- Mình thấy " greater" là so sánh hơn ở đây là hơn với cái gì . " In 2010,  Computer Science was still the most popurlar choice among graduates with 45%"

- Từ "earn" nghĩa là kiếm được, mà t thấy người ta hay dùng earn khi nói đến tiền bạc. earn => receive

t cũng mới tự học nên trình độ còn gà mà. t chỉ hiểu sao nói vậy thôi