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Topic : Compare the modern city and countryside

Nowadays, almost countries in the world have modern city and countryside. Some people like living in modern city but others do not think so. In my opinion, I like living in the modern city. Firstly, I think living in a modern city brings us have many advantages comfort life such as entertainments, education, health care. The modern city has more hospitals than countryside, so we easy to choose the best it for diagnose and I believe the doctors in modern city also better than the doctors in countryside. For example there are many people in the countryside move to modern city to diagnose of disease. Besides the life in modern city always more exciting than the life in countryside. Because the modern city has many places of entertainment. For instance there are many cinemas, theatres, sport clubs, amusement parks, restaurants and supermarkets. Secondly, almost people live in country always move to the modern city to looking for opportunity to earn much money. In face, the modern city is usually central of business, so there are many people spend money to shopping, foods, furniture. Therefore, it help us easy to get money. Education in the modern city is better than the countryside because most of famous university is gathered at the modern city. However, Living in the modern city also has many troubles with our healths such as traffic congestion, air pollution, flooding and overpopulation. You will be cope with those troubles in everyday. Day by day, our health is getting worse and worse. I think people’s health live in countryside is better than people’s health live in modern city. All in all, I like living the modern city because I used to living an activity life.                

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Mở bài không ổn lắm nhen bạn!

Nowadays, almost countries in the world have modern city and countryside. Some people like living in modern city but others do not think so. In my opinion, I like living in the modern city. (Ở đây đề hỏi là bạn phải so sánh giữa thành phố hiện đại và nông thôn) => (These days, some people want to spend their life in countryside but other love the fluster of the modern city. However, I think living in the modern city or peaceful countryside is good but there are also significant differents between them).

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Firstly, I think living in a modern city brings us have many advantages comfort life such as entertainments, education, health care => (living in modern city gives us many benefits such as .......). The modern city has more hospitals than countryside, so we easy to choose the best it for diagnose => (it is easy for us to choose the best one) and I believe the doctors in modern city also better than the doctors in countryside (ý này mình nghĩ bạn nên bỏ đi vì chưa chắc là bác sĩ ở quê lại tệ hơn ở thành phố đâu hoặc có thể thay thế như thế này) => . As you know, the technology of the hospitals in the city is very modern so we can recuperate fastly as possible .  Besides,  the life in modern city is always more exciting than the life in (countryside because the modern city) has many places of entertainment.Moreover, there are many cinemas, theatres, sport clubs, amusement parks, restaurants and supermarkets.

Secondly, many people live in country always move to the modern city to look for an opportunity to earn much money. In face,there are many people spend money to shopping, foods, furniture. Therefore, it help us easy to get money. Education in the modern city is often better than the countryside because most of famous university is gathered at the modern city. However, Living in the modern city also has many troubles with our healths such as traffic congestion, air pollution, flooding and overpopulation. You will be cope with those troubles in everyday. Day by day, our health is getting worse and worse. I think people’s health live in countryside is better than people’s health live in modern city.

All in all, I like living the modern city because I used to living an activity life.        

 

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