ielts task1 :bar chart and pie chart

Question

The chart illustrate the total money expended on various types ò advertising between 2005 and 2006

We can clearly see from the pie chart that TV have expenditure the most on advertising and internet witnesses the lowest in 2005.But in 2006 the bar chart show that internet was the highest in expenditure

Tv have a large number of expenditure with 63.3 biliions of dollars but quickly fail to 9 percent of expended.Whereas,the internet has jumped suddenly from 8.8 billions of dollars to 25 percent.Another types of advertisng also increase smoothly from 13 billions of dollars to 7.5 percent,was magazine.

Direct mail was having the same level at 57.2 billions of dollars anf 10 percent in 1 years.The expenditure in newspaper and radio in 2005 was almost exactly the same as in 2006.

 

 

Answer 1

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The chart illustrates the total money expended on various types ò advertising between 2005 and 2006

[We can clearly see ] According to the the pie chart that TV have expenditure the most on advertising and internet witnesses the lowest in 2005.But in 2006 the bar chart shows that internet was the highest in expenditure số liệu %

Tv (have) quá khứ dùng had a large number of expenditure with 63.3 biliions of dollars but (V+ADV) fail  quickly to 9 percent of expended.Whereas,the internet (has) had jumped suddenly from 8.8 billions of dollars to 25 percent.Another types of advertisng also increased smoothly from 13 billions of dollars to 7.5 percent,was magazine.

Direct mail was having the same level at 57.2 billions of dollars anf 10 percent in 1 years.The expenditure in newspaper and radio in 2005 was almost exactly the same as in 2006.

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