A paragraph about your favorite wild animal

Question

            One of wild animals I like the most is foxes. Foxes are divided into 27 kinds, and the most popular kind is Vulpes vulpes. They are such beautiful and smart creatures. This kind of foxes has a neat and small body. It is a wild mammary animal of the dog family, with reddish-brown fur, a pointed face and a thick heavy tail. This creature can swim, and it is really a good swimmer. The Vulpes foxes can be found in almost continents. A fox's life can last for 10 years, but nowadays human hunting lessenes fox lifespan  down to 2 or 3 years and makes them scarce. Fox is a lone hunter, and it is really good at hunting in silence. A fox moves very smoothly, nimbly to get closed to its quarries, then grab and kill them. A fox  usually hunt rodients, such as rabbits, squirrels, mice,... Fox is also cautious when it sees human nearby, and if a fox is about to be attacked, it becomes very agile and run away from dangers fast. Fox's alertness is the main reason why I love these creatures very much.

Answer 1

   One of wild animals I like the most is foxes. Foxes are divided into 27 kinds, and the most popular kind is Vulpes vulpes. They which are such beautiful and smart creatures. This kind of foxes has a neat and small body. It is a wild mammary animal of the dog family, with reddish-brown fur, a pointed face and a thick heavy tail. This creature can swim, and it is really a good swimmer. The Vulpes foxes can be found in almost all continents. A fox's life can last for 10 years, but nowadays human hunting lessenes fox lifespan down to 2 or 3 years and makes them scarce rare. Fox is a lone hunter, and it is really good at hunting in silence. A fox Fox moves very smoothly, nimbly to get closed to its quarries, then grab and kill them. A fox They usually hunt rodients, such as rabbits, squirrels, mice,... Fox is also cautious when it sees human nearby, and if a fox is about to be attacked, it becomes very agile and run away from dangers fast. Fox's alertness is the main reason why I love these creatures very much.

There are only few mistakes that I have noted so that you can pay attention and improve your next task. Hope my comments can help you!