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Some people think that work is the most important part of people’s life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay:

Some people hold a belief that a fruitful career is an indispensable part of people’s lives and their lives only make sense when they have it. I completely disagree with this view.

 

a successful career is not the only factor that makes people’s lives meaningful. health and relationships are two no less important elements that people often strive for in order to have a fulfilling life. Furthermore, many people still enjoy a meaningful life without having an outstanding career. For example, my grandfather led a happy life as an ordinary mechanic worker before he passed away. It is because what he wanted to pursue in life was not money or fame but the sense of satisfaction when he had somebody to love, to share his life with, and to take care of. 

 

At the same time, I believe that people perceive things differently when they age. It is true that at twenty four, a young adult might consider having a successful career the most important thing in life, but at fifty his life priorities might change to something different. For instance, my mother used to consider her career as an accountant the most important thing in her life when she was young, but now she has shifted her priorities to having a good health and a long-lasting relationship with my father. She is now retired and leads a happy life with my family.

 

In conclusion, I believe that many different factors make life a worthwhile one, and having a fulfilling career is just one of them.

 

Answer 1

 

a successful career is not the only factor that makes people’s lives meaningful. health and relationships are two no less important elements that people often strive for HAVING a fulfilling life. Furthermore, many people still enjoy a meaningful life without having an outstanding career. For example, my grandfather HAD a happy life as an ordinary mechanic worker before he passed away. It is because what he wanted to pursue in life was not money or fame but the sense of satisfaction when he had somebody to love, to share his life with, and to take care of. 

 

At the same time, I believe that people perceive things differently ACCORDING TO AGES. ADMITTEDLY at twenty four, a young adult might consider having a successful career the most important thing in life, but at fifty his life priorities might change to something MORE SIGNIFICANT . For instance, my mother used to consider her career as an accountant the most PIVOTAL in her life when she was young, but now she has ALTERED her priorities to having a good health and a long-lasting relationship with my father. She is now retired and MAINTAIN a happy life with my family.

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