IELTS sang ngay 21/5/2015

Question

The more morden life is,the busier people are. In the past, a women usually marrys during at the age of twenty from twenty-three. They birth the children and take care of them . The women is always do housework ,sometime it is so sad. The man go out to work and to earn . In XX century, the women have changes very much.The women not only carees but also have a power as the man. The women go out and take part in the activities social, the meetings, political, so on. What a good news! In beside to, that is cause of  people decide to have to children later in their life. They are not consider about children as much as in the past. They are worry about many things in the life which include economics, money, friends, coopareds,and the future. If the people not make the life themsleves , the people will become independent on the others . This is the influence of the social, sometimes good or bad. However, people need to thinking about the family more, because otherday we will feel lonely and tired with the difficutl live.

Answer 1

The more morden life is,the busier people are: Không hiểu tại sao ở giữa câu lại có dấu phẩy?

In the past, a women usually marrys during at the age of twenty from twenty-three: Quá khứ sao lại chia động từ ở hiện tại

he more morden life is,the busier people are. In the past, a women usually marrys during at the age of twenty from twenty-three. They birth the children and take care of them . The women is always do housework ,sometime it is so sad. The man go out to work and to earn . In XX century, the women have changes very much.The women not only carees but also have a power as the man. The women go out and take part in the activities social, the meetings, political, so on. What a good news! In beside to, that is cause of  people decide to have to children later in their life. They are not consider about children as much as in the past. They are worry about many things in the life which include economics, money, friends, coopareds,and the future. If the people not make the life themsleves , the people will become independent on the others . This is the influence of the social, sometimes good or bad. However, people need to thinking about the family more, because otherday we will feel lonely and tired with the difficutl live.