Bài IELTS Task 1

Question

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart compares the global population with the distribution of wealth in various regions of the world.

Overall, the population of North America, Europe, Rich Asia-Pacific is less than the global wealth. Another visible trend is that, the other regions have the population higher than the distribution of wealth. It can be clearly seen that the population in almost all cases do not relate to the world’s wealth.

According to the chart, although, North America has only nearly 6% of the world’s population, it gets approximately 34% of the global wealth. Similarly, in Europe where has 15% of global population but has 30% of world’s wealth. In addition, the percentages of global population and global wealth in Rich Asia-Pacific are 5% and under 25% respectively.

However, the total wealth of people in Poor Asia-Pacific, China, India, Africa, Latin America and Caribbean remarkably lower than their total population. Especially, the world’s wealth of India is only nearly 1% but its population is approximately 16%; and in China where has the highest percentage of global population (under 25%) but only nearly 3% of the world’s wealth.

Answer 1

Bài report của bạn có nội dung tương đối tốt nhưng hơi dài.

Phần overall theo mình câu "It can be clearly seen that........" là không cần thiết.

Một số lỗi ngữ pháp: "in Europe where..." theo mình là bỏ in hoặc thay where=which.

Bạn dùng khá nhiều từ "nearly" and "approximately", bạn nên thay = các từ đồng nghĩa khác nhau.