write a paragraph about your best friend

Question

My best friend classmate is Nga. The first reason why I like her most is her nice appearance. She has long black hair and beautiful eyes. She is tall and thin enough to participate in VN nexttop model. Not only does she have a pretty appearance but she also has good characteristics. When I feel sad, nervous or stressful, she is always by my side and encourage me to overcome difficult challenges in my life. I'M so grateful for it. Moreover, she once said that:" If oneday you feel like crying, call me..I don't promise that i will make you laugh..but i can cry with you" In addition to that, we have unforgetable experience. In 1997, I was drowning when she appeared and secured me from the Death and since then, we has become closed fiends. We share a lot of things such as dreas, jobs, hobbies,.. I strongly believe that our relationship is lasting forever.

Answer 1

When I feel sad, nervous or stressful, she is always by my side and encourage me to overcome difficult challenges  ----> (theo mình có thể viết thế này )  In my mind, the most important thing is I can always count on her to be there for me when I 'm feeling a little down or I 'm facing a difficult situation. She always lifts my spirits

Answer 2

My best friend classmate is Nga. 

Mình k hiểu phần này lắm. Có thể viết lại bằng 2 cách:

-My best friend and classmate is Nga: bạn thân và bạn cùng lớp của tôi là Nga

-My best friend, who is also my classmate, is Nga: Người bạn thân, cũng là bạn cùng lớp của tôi, là Nga   

 In addition to that, we have unforgetable experience. 

Vì kể lại kỉ niệm quá khứ nên nên dùng thì quá khứ

---> chữa lại thành: "... we had unforgetable experience"

I strongly believe that our relationship is lasting forever.

Nói về một sự dự đoán, hứa hẹn, nên dùng thì tương lai đơn giản.

--->chữa lại thành: " ... our relationship will last forever."

Answer 3

My best friend classmate is Nga.

Theo mình phải sửa lại là: My best friend in the class is Nga.

Hoặc là 1 trong 2 cách sau đây: -My best friend is Nga. She and I study in the same class.

                                                          -My best classmate is Nga.

Trên chỉ là những ý kiến đóng góp của mình. Mong bạn hãy nhận xét và đưa ra quyết định riêng của mình. Dù sao mình thấy bài của bạn rất hay và mình cần phải học hỏi nhiều hơn vì mình chỉ mới là 1 học sinh THCS. Chúc bạn luôn thành công và sẽ viết đc nhiêu bài viết hay hơn thế nữa. Những lỗi nhỏ thì khắc phục sau cũng đc.

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Answer 4

Everyone has their closed friends to share happiness and sadness.So am i.My closest friend is Dung.He is quite a intelligence boy,ease-going,and especially homourous.Thanks to his nice appearance,he has bring a lot of fun to everyone around him not except me.Besides,Dung is also a optimistic boy,he always smile on his face even in most difficult situations.Morever,he learns very well,he is usually on the top of my school,he has now helped many weak friends to be better in their learning.Not only does Dung a excellent student,but he also is a good son in the family.Dung often help his family with housechores and even earn more money by doing half time of jobs.Although he is busy all time,he try to spend as much time as possible sharing happy or sad things with me.As for me,i really happy to be friend with such a wonderful person like Dung.I hope our friendship will be forever.

 

Comments

Everyone has their closed friends to share happiness and sadness.So am i. ( câu phía trước ko dùng tobe nên đằng sau ko đảo tobe nhé . So do I ). My closest friend is Dung.He is quite a (an) intelligence boy,ease-going,and especially homourous.Thanks to his nice appearance,he has bring  (brings)a lot of fun to everyone around him not except me.Besides,Dung is also a (an) optimistic boy,he always smile on his face even in most difficult situations.Morever,he learns very well,he is usually on the top of my school,he has now helped many weak friends to be better in their learning.Not only does Dung a excellent student,but he also is a good son in the family.Dung often help his family with housechores and even earn more money by doing half time of jobs.Although he is busy all time,he try to spend as much time as possible sharing happy or sad things with me.As for me,i really happy to be friend with such a wonderful person like Dung.I hope our friendship will be forever.

Answer 5

Bn còn nhiều từ sai (những từ in đỏ, gạch chân) và mink đã sửa cho bn (những từ đỏ). Bn nên rút kinh nghiệm bn nhé!