Essay on SUPERSTITION : why do people believe in the unknown things and suggest solutions to it

Question

In primitive society, superstition have appeared in most parts of the world. Nowadays, it seems to be more prevalant and causes many adverse effects on society. On this essay, I will elaborate on causes and recommend some solutions to it.

Each person has different views on superstition. From my point of view, there is only one reason which explains why humans are so superstitious : belief. They believe in god, godless, ghost and other unknown things though they have never meet them directly in reality. They fear that they will be punished whenever they do not follow the traditional customs. They are afraid of the god's wrath. As a result, they have to dedicate tributes to be safe and sound. Additionally, people also believe that god will bless them, brings them happiness and feeling of safety.

There are quite a lot of solutions to deal with the problem. I think, however, the most effective method is making them believe in science instead of these unknown things. Everything has its own causes and they all can be explained by science. In order to do that, scientists have to figure out the causes and consequences of all phenomenon. For example, primitive man consider storms and thunders as signs of the god's wrath. If they are taught that storms and thunders are just normal natural phenomenons, their mind will be more free.

It can not be undeniable that superstition has some benefits. However, personally I think the disadvantages are outweigh the opposites.

In conclusion, I want to reiterate that the ignorant belief is the major cause of superstition and science is a key to solve the problem.

Answer 1

In primitive society, superstition have appeared in most parts of the world. Nowadays, it seems to be more prevalant and it has caused many adverse effects on society. In this essay, I will elaborate on causes and recommend some solutions to them. 

Each person has different views on superstition. From my point of view, there is only one reason which explains why humans are so superstitious : belief.đề bài không hỏi ý kiến của bạn nên đừng đề cập đến, sẽ mất điểm task reponse đấy. They believe in god, godless, ghost and other unknown things though they have never meet them directly in reality. They fear that they will be punished w henever they do not follow the religious faiths . They are afraid of the god's wrath. As a result, they have to dedicate tributes to be safe and sound. Additionally, people also believe that god will bless them, brings them happiness and feeling of safety. 

There are quite a number of ( lot informal) solutions to deal with the problem. I think, however, the most effective method is making them believe in science instead of these unknown things. Everything has its own causes and they all can be explained by science. In order to do that, scientists need to figure out the causes and consequences of all phenomenon. For example, primitive man consider storms and thunders as signs of the god's wrath. If they are proved that storms and thunders are just normal natural phenomenons, their mind will be more free. 

It can not be undeniable that superstition has some benefits. However, personally I think the disadvantages are outweigh the opposites. Không hỏi ý kiến của bạn mà

In conclusion, I want to reiterate that the ignorant belief is the major cause of superstition and science is a key to solve the problem.

Tổ chức bài tốt, chia đoạn hợp lí. Tuy nhiên mỗi đoạn chỉ có 1 idea triển thành 1 đoạn văn làm hơi dông dài khó chịu. Anyways, bạn làm tốt lắm :D

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