Ielts task 1 - The radio and TV users

Question

The line graph represents the proportions of British  (over 4 years old) in using radio and television in the last quarter of 1992.

As can be seen in the graph ,  The figures for both  the TV users and  the radio listeners had a same upward trend before falling down at the end of the given period. 

From the beginning of the day at 6 a.m , The percentage of tv users started at 0% with the figures for radio audiences beginning  at about 8% before they crossed each other at nearly 15% at the middle of the day .

In the following period , The data of the tv viewers increased  dramatically by almost 30%, reaching a peak at about 45% before going down quickly to approximately 2% at the end of the day . At the same time , the statistics of the radio users  fluctuated slightly  around  2% .

 

Answer 1

1. The line graph represents the proportions of British  (over 4 years old) in using radio and television in the last quarter of 1992.

The line graph describes changes in the proportions of Uk population ( over 4 years old) who used radio and televison during whole day in the last quarter of 1992

Uk nghĩa là United Kingdom # British bạn nhé

2. As can be seen in the graph ,  The figures for both  the TV users and  the radio listeners had a same upward trend before falling down at the end of the given period. 

cái trend này ko được hợp lý lắm nếu là mình sẽ viết

It can be seen from the line graph that the figure for radio listeners reached a peak in the morning while the figure for TV users did in the evening

3. Nêu miêu tả hết từng đường một rồi mới miêu tả đường số 2.

minh chỉ nhận xét chút vậy chứ mình cũng gà lắm

 

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