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Face to face cummunication is better than the other types of cummunication such as email, letters etc., Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Use specific reason to support your opinionAs the world is developing day by day, so do types of communication. Nowadays, we don’t need to go far from our current places to make new connections. Just by sitting home with a computer or a telephone, we can do that work. That’s why most people like types of communications such as email, letters etc., But for me, I would rather face to face communication. It’s not that I don’t find the other types useful. They do, indeed. It’s just I find face to face communication better and I have good reasons for that opinion.

First of all, making new friends n the internet will only show us their names or at least their nick name. We can’t know for sure if there are their real names and if they are bad or good guy because we do not know their face. But if we talk to them face to face, we can certainly know who are we talking to. Secondly, on the internet, we only chat or chatting only uses words. Some people just write out what they want us to know but may be not truth. So we can’t really know if they are truly feeling like. They write they are. With face to face communication, we don’t need to be crazy because of knowing their true emotions. We can know their emotions through their face. One’s face speak up everything what that person thinks. What an advantage!. And last but not least, sometimes, it’s really hard for us to express out thoughts in words. This case happens really frequently to people whose vocabulary are quite narrow. In contrast to the above fact. Face to face communication can solve this problem very quickly. If we can’t use our words, then body language will help. It’s quite amazing, isn’t it? However, there not only advantage but also disadvantages. For instance, it’s not like we are always able to talk face to face to the person you want to meet. Moreover there are some subtle questions that we need to use words. But on the top of all that, advantages are a lot more than disadvantages. Therefore, I would agree that for now, at least face to face communication provides us with more comfort than other types of communications.

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Hi there :)))

Here are some of my comments :

- First, your essay doesn't meet the requirement of a standard essay ( including 3 parts : introduction, body and conclusion)

- Second, i think you shouldn't write words in short form  ( That's --> That is...)

- Your ideas are quite interesting but coz u don't write in paragraphs, it's very hard to follow. so, i think you should write main ideas in different paragraphs

- Finally, i think your introduction is rather too much. i usually indicate my opinion only, and mention reasons in body

Hope that these help :)
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tks for your help, will correct and do accordingly

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