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Question

đề: you would like to borrow a book from your friend. Write an email to your friend. In your email, you should:

1. tell your friend which book you would like to borrow

2. explain why you need to borrow this book

3. say how long you need the book for.

answer:
Dear charlie,
It's been a long time since I last wrote an email to you. How is it going? I hope your everything goes well.

I am writing to ask you whether can you lend me some books or not. I am learning English in my school and my teacher assigned us some writing tasks in that book last week. However, I could not find mine anywhere and I can only go to buy a new one next week, so I would like to borrow your grammar books and others.
I haven't read book for a long time, so as you know, I am a bookworm and extremely keen on discovering, I need you lend me some self-help books which can help me find out the fun after school as well as widen my horizons. On the other hand, it's a chance for me to provide extra information to finish my homework on time.

Since I need them to service for my assignment and my relaxing, I only borrow them for a short time, about five days. I will return the books to you on Friday.

well, that's all my news. I'd better end now because I have to get back to study. And if you want to ask any further information, just contact me.

Have a nice day! Best regards,
John