In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?

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Today, there are only a few young people attending to the shows of classical music or playing classical music in several nations. There are several reason why this happens; however, I would argue that young people should be encouraged to attend and learn more.

There are several reason why not many young people are interested in this kind of music. The first reason for this is that classical music seems to boring for youngsters. It is because most of classical music has hard-to-understand lyrics. Because of this, only few young people go to classical music concerts or playing classical music. The second reason for this is that young people are often attracted by new types of music such as pop, rock or hip hop because some trendy types of music have some attractive lyrics, and they are suitable for the new generations. Due to this, the youth tend to have no interest in going to classical music concerts or playing classical music.

However, I would argue that young people should be encouraged to attend and learn more classical music. First, encouraging young people to learn or listen to this kind of music is likely to benefit the youth because this music can enhance their creativity. When youngsters listen to this genre of music, they impossibly imagine the story from that song. Second, learning or listening to classical music is one of the ways to protect and develop this kind of music. If people learn or listen to classical music more, they will remember and sing it, leading to the preservation of this music.
In conclusion, many young people have reasons for not interested in this kind of music, but I would opine that they should be encouraged to attend and learn more classical music.

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_young people-->inexperienced people, the young, juveniles
_classical music-->classical piece/melody
_reason-->rationale, motive