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         Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment? 

  There is no question that talent shows have gained prevalence all over the world in the present age. It is claimed that they acquire a reputation for both getting recreation and seeking gifted people. I totally give approval of this

          As regards entertainment, I assure that the main purpose of organizers is to make lots of money as much as possible. This is much a matter of ratings. This fact is attested by an array of dramas they make , with a mandate to draw viewers’ attention such as debates among judges. Besides, the hosts , who are most likely to have a sense of humor, are invited more. For example, Tran Thanh , an all-round MC, is a famous comedian. Whichever program he participates in is successful and receives a great deal of interaction. As a result, fun elements boost the audience’s craving for watching and following from start to finish so that they can relieve stress after a nerve- racking day

When it comes to looking enhance for talented people, the shows are a perfect opt. As soon as they arrive, contestants with natural abilities register to join in as this is a good chance to show off their ability. Moreover, coaches ,who have expertise in their field, are always willing to their talent. Therefore, they get not only more experience but also confidence and performance skills. What is more, any contest aims to seek a winner , who is actually excellent to overcome hundreds of other ones. After the shows, they can continue pursuing their dreams with fewer obstacles on their ways. It is evidenced that manifold singers become successful and famous when stepping out from competitions

       To sum up, in my view, talent shows contribute to entertainment as well as finding gifted people

 

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- Remove space before a comma. Eg: make(line 3), hosts(line 4), Tran Thanh(line 5), coaches(line 11), winner(line 13)

- ...What is more...(line 12) ---> Moreover

- ...a good chance...(line 10)---> an excellent chance
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