Bài IELTS task 1 15/8

Question

 

 

My topic:

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

 

My essay:

The line chart compares the spending on books in four nations: Germany, France, Italy and Austria. Data points are shown for many years between 1995 and 2005.

Overall, people in Germany spent more money on books than people in the other three countries. However, spending on books increased in all nations over 10 years.

In 1995, people spent $80 million on books in Germany. The amount of money on books in France and Italy is almost similar, $50 million and $55 million. And in Austria, only $30 million spent on books. Although the amount of money in Germany decreased between 1999 and 2003, it was higher in the other countries during the period and it reach a peak of $95 million in 2005.

The spending on books in France increased steadily from $55 million in 1995 to $75 million in 2005. The amount of money spent on books in Austria also increased slightly between 1995 and 2001, from $30 million to $40 million. However, it rose sharply from $30 million in 2001 to nearly $75 million in 2005, it was the highest amount of money spent on books in Austria. Despite the fluctuation, the spending on books in Italy reach its maximum of $63 millions in 2005.

Answer 1

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