Bài IELTS task 1:The chart below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on reataurant meals in different years.

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Task 1:The chart below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on reataurant meals in different years.The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

             The chart illustrates the proportion of spent restaurant foods and homemade food in four different years and indicates the figure for two discrepancy restaurant type.

              As can be seen the chart, people'tendency to have meal outside recovered sharply between 1970 and 2000.Just 10% food budget spent on restaurant meals in 1970.This percentage increased double approximately 35% in 1990. And it continued to surge steadily about 50% in 2000.

             In addition, the most significant point in the line chart is that although both the number of fast food and sitdown restaurant meals start same point at 20 meals,it had two divergence ending.In thirty years period,sitdown restaurant meals rose gradually from 35 in 1980 to 55 in 2000.Meanwhile,fast food only 25 meals in1980.However,it rocketed dramatically and reached the peak at with 87 meals.In general,people tens eat in the restaurant and fast food is more widespread in recent years.

Answer 1

             The chart illustrates the proportions of spent restaurant foods and homemade food in four different years and indicates the figure for two discrepancy restaurant type. ->The given pie chart illustrates the common family budget spent on restaurants' meals. Meanwhile, the second line graph indicates changes in the number of sit-down restaurants and fast food restaurants' meals from 1970 to 2000.

             As can be seen from the chart, people'tendency -> people's tendency/ humans' tendency to have meal outside recovered sharply between 1970 and 2000, beginning with only 10% of food budget spent on restaurant meals in 1970.This percentage increased double  to approximately 35% in 1990, and it continued to surge steadily about 50% in 2000.

*Đề xuất: In general, the restaurants' meals witnessed a gradual upward trend through the entire period. Whilst, constant increases were recorded in sit-down restaurants and fast food restaurants' figures as well. (Overview là đoạn dùng để mô tả xu hướng chung cả biểu đồ, độ dài tầm 3-4 câu, không nhất thiết phải đưa số liệu vào)

             In addition, the most significant point in the line chart is that although both the number of fast food and sit-down restaurant meals started at the same point -> positions at 20 meals, it had two divergence ending -> there were two divergent outcome. In thirty years period -> a thirty-year period/ thirty years, sit-down restaurant meals rose gradually from 35 in 1980 to 55 in 2000. Meanwhile, fast food restaurants' figure was only 25 meals in 1980.However,it -> which rocketed dramatically and reached the peak at with 87 meals. In general, people tens eat in the restaurant and fast food is more widespread in recent years. -> customers' tendency to have meals at restaurants and fast food's popularity continously grew through the whole period. (câu này bạn sử dụng với chức năng mô tả xu hướng chính của biểu đồ, nên để ở overview sẽ hợp lý hơn cuối đoạn)

 

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