Writing task 1_The making of pencils

Question

The provided diagram give information about how pencils are manufactured from scratch. By a large, it is clear that the process involves eight fundamental stages, beginning with preparing the materials and ending in packaging.
At the first stage, the seeds are sowed in order to start growing the young pine trees, which are replanted after four months. Next, the pine tress are thinned for quality consistency before being harvested to prepare woods for manufacturing process when they are enough fourteen years old. After that, manufacturer use speacialised machine to cut acquired timber into thin slats and went through a curing process.
Two months later, the processed material begins to go through the assembly process, in which the glue is used to secured the black leads in the grooves. Then, a new slat is added so that the lead is sandwiched by two pieces of wood before wood before the entire assembly is hard-pressed together under high heat. At this point, the “sandwich” is cut into individual pencil. Finally, the pencils are painted, sharpened and labeled. This is the last process before portioned and packaged to the consumer.

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Answer 1

The provided diagram give-> gives information about how pencils are manufactured from scratch.

By a large->Overall/In general, it is clear that the process involves eight fundamental stages, beginning with preparing the materials-> materials’ preparation and ending in->with packaging.

At the first stage, the seeds are sowed in order to start growing the young pine trees, which are->would be replanted after four months. Next, the pine trees are thinned for quality consistency before being harvested to prepare woods for the manufacturing process when they are enough->completely fourteen years old. After that, manufacturers use specialized machine to cut acquired timbers into thin slats and went through a curing process->, which would witness/undergo/experience a curing process.(note: câu cuối này không có hình nên mình cũng không hiểu ý bạn lắm, sửa theo tưởng tượng của mình về cái quy trình đã cho thôi nha)

Two months later->After a two-month period, the processed material begins to go through the->undergo an assembly process, in which the glue is used to secured the black leads in the grooves. Then, a new slat is added so that the lead is sandwiched by two pieces of wood before the entire assembly is hard-pressed together under high heat. At this point, the “sandwich” is cut into individual pencil. Finally, the pencils are painted, sharpened and labeled. This is the last process before portioned and packaged->being portioned and packaged to the consumers.

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