IELTS Writing - Opinion

Question

Topic:

• Choose a popular sport or activity
• Think of reasons why people would or wouldn't want to take part in the competition.
• Think of support (facts or examples) for each resson you come up with.

My Writing:

     Football or called “soccer” is one of the most popular in Vietnam and both in the world( include developing country and non-develop country), When talking to Football that those always thought FIFA, FC, World Cup tournaments, Since four of a year, FIFA tournaments will be organized by the organizer at different countries and each organize country will be called host nature. In addition, during a tournament will have competitors and cheering’s, The player like to join bigger tournaments because they afford to earn money when they won and they still receive bonus money when they well-expect during in tournament For example when they face to face stronger opponents and thank to lucky that they award won, after that, they can receive more and more money, maybe over ten of billions and they add receive from ratio odds by spectators and the people, whose love football betting. Besides, they take part in tournaments, Whose can bring express for ethnic at that time the canning expert our talent and our abilities. For example, same top situations, if they face to face with the strongest teams on FIFA and they have lower chances for winning. Fortunately, they win and awarded a trophy, at that time they bring the express for locals

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Answer 1

Football or called “soccer” is one of the most popular in Vietnam and both in the world (include developing country and non-develop country -->  developing countries and developed countries), When talking to  -->  about Football that those -->  most of people always thought -->  think about FIFA, FC, World Cup tournaments, Since four of a year -->  every four years,  FIFA tournaments will be organized -->  held by the organizers at different countries and each organize country will -->  which will be called host nature -->  nation. In addition, during a tournament will have competitors and cheering’s -->  a tournament include participants and cheering’s, The players like to join bigger tournaments because they afford to -->  can earn money when they won and they still receive bonus money when they well-expect during -->  got good achievements in the tournament. For example, when they face to face stronger opponents and thank to lucky that they award --> won, after that, they can receive more and more money, maybe over ten of billions and they add  -->  also receive additional bonus from ratio odds by spectators and the people, whose love football betting. Besides, they take part in the tournaments, Whose can bring express for ethnic at that time the canning expert our talent and our abilities -->  the players who represent their nation show the talent and reputation of their country. For example, same top situations, if they face to face --> fight with the strongest teams on FIFA and they have lower chances for winning. Fortunately, --> Luckily, they win -->  won and awarded --> gain  a trophy, at that time they bring the express for locals -->  their countries are very proud of them.