Some critics said that a wealthy nation is unable to keep environment clean and healthy. In my opinion. I -> (Nên dùng dấu , ) disagree with this notion and the following essay will outline some reasons behind it.
On the one hand, when the economically development ( the economy develop), the environment will be greatly affected. A prosperous economic ( economy) is associated with industrial development, which required enormous amount of resources and raw fuel, ranging from wood to coal . Therefore, the more development ( industrilized) an economy become, the more its ( its ở đây ám chỉ economy nên sai về nghĩa) the environment is exploited and the and more emission from manufacturing is released to the environment. As a consequence of economically successful (As a result), citizens with higher living standard have increase greater demand for consumer good ( their consumption of goods) . The amount of waste into environment would increase dramatically, both liquid and solid and it is causes would eventually lead to pollution environmental
On the other hand, it is still possible for the co-existence between stable economic growth and clean environment ( evironmental friendly development) . Nowadays, developing countries have been applying their breakthroughs in science and technology in figuring out measures to curb adverse impacts of economic expansion on the nature. They find alternative energy sources instead of non-renewable resources, which are environmentally friendly and sustainable. (which ở đây thay thế cho non-renewable resorces chứ không phải alternative energy sources nên bị lỗi ngữ pháp)
Moreover, clean and healthy environment facilitates a sustainable economy, especially tourism. Countries whose natural habitat is attacted and well- preserved benefit from the influx of tourist worldwide in the form of eco-tourism.
In conclusion, economical development and environmental protections would be possible with variety of feasible measures
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