You received an email from your English friend, Jane. She asked you for some information about one of your friends.

Question

Dear Jane,

I’m sorry for making you wait, because of the time zone so I can’t answer immediately. When I heard that An asked to stay with your family, I was surprised, and I’d love to tell you something about her as much as I can.

We had studied for several years, so I think I know her pretty well. An is an active person, she can easily get along with other people, she likes helping everyone, and she is honest, so you may point about her. But she is quite narrow-minded and irritable.

As I remembered, both of you have a lot in common. She plays volleyball as well as you do, she had won the 1st prize in our secondary school. Besides, She likes Taylor Swift, and her type of music is the same as you.

As a friend, I hope that you will accept her. We will glad to hear that. 

Thanks and regards.

 

Answer 1

Dear Jane,

I’m sorry for making you wait, because of the time zone so I can’t answer immediately. When I heard that An HAD asked to stay with your family, I was surprised, and I’d love to tell you something about her as much as I can.

We studied for several years, so I think I know her pretty well. An is an active person, she can easily get along with other people, she likes helping everyone, and she is honest, so you may point about her. But she is quite narrow-minded and irritable.

As I remembered, both of you have a lot in common. She plays volleyball as well as you do, she won the 1st prize in our secondary school. Besides, She likes Taylor Swift, and HER FAVORITE type of music is the same as YOURS

As a friend, I hope that you will accept her. We will glad to hear that. 

 

Thanks and regards.

 

*Bài bạn viết rất hay, mình có chút góp ý như trên vậy thôi nha. phần in hoa là phần mình sửa á