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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

 

The chart illustrates the proportion of women and men in one Asia country who passed when they took their driving test in 30 years from 1980 to 2010.

Overall, the proportion of people who passed their driving test increased through the years. It is apparent that the percentage of women who passed the driving test is higher than men. 

The percentage of women passing their driving test in 1980 was almost 50%. In 1990, it grew up over a half and climbed up to nearly 70% in 2000. In 2010, there was a slight decrease down to 65%.

The proportion of men who passed their driving test significantly went up throughout the years. In two decades between 1980 and 2000, it went up about 10% each 10 years, from 28% in 1980 to 37% in 1990 and 49% in 2000. The highest number by just under 50% in 2000 remained still until 2010.

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The chart illustrates the proportion of women and men in one Asia country who passed when they took their driving test in 30 years from 1980 to 2010.

Overall, the proportion of people who passed their driving test increased through the years. It is apparent that the percentage of women who passed the driving test is higher than men. 

The percentage of women passing their driving test in 1980 was almost 50%. In 1990, it grew up over a half and climbed up to nearly 70% in 2000. In 2010, there was a slight decrease down to 65%.

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The proportion of men who passed their driving test significantly went up throughout the years. In two decades between 1980 and 2000, it went up about 10% each 10 years, from 28% in 1980 to 37% in 1990 and 49% in 2000. The highest number by just under 50% in 2000 remained still until 2010.

 

. It is apparent that-> ;and,

than men--> than in men.

climbed up--> climbed

 In two decades --> In the two decades 

each 10--> every ten

 

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