What should we do to prepare for a storm

Question

Every year, VN always faces up to many tropical storms. Although scientists can predict when it happens, it sometimes goes on suddently. So preparing well before storm comes is very necessary and pratical. Here are some my advices to have a storm-ready. First of all, we have to update the latest announces of the goverment about the direction, speech and intensity of that storm in  order to know exactly what time it will attrack. Second, we should cut down the branches and trees to avoid falling down onto our roof. In addition, our roof must be chacked carefully and hold by sandbags. Third, make sure that we stored food enough so we don't have to go out when storm is coming. And last but not least, we have some important things such as flash-light, candles,.. and water for using in a long time. In cluding, none of us can escape from the terrible destruction of storms. But we can cut down its damage. Let's prepare well to protest ourselves

Answer 1

Every year, VN always has to faces up to many tropical storms. Although scientists can predict when and where it happens, it sometimes goes on suddently. So preparing well before storm comes is very necessary and pratical. Here are some my advices to have a storm-ready. First of all, we have to update the latest announces of the goverment about the direction through media devices, including speech and intensity of that storm in  order to know exactly what time it will attrack. Second, we should cut down the branches and trees to avoid them from falling down onto our roof. In addition, our roof must be chacked carefully and hold held by sandbags. Third, make sure that we stored store food enough enough food so that we don't have to go out when storm is coming. And last but not least, we should have some important things such as flash-light, candles,.. and water for using in a long time. In cluding,In conclusion,  none of us can escape from the terrible destruction of storms. But we can cut down minimize its damage. Let's prepare well to protest ourselves.

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