Listening to music is the best leisure activities teenagers

Question

In today's world, I believe listening to music is the best activities for teenagers. Firstly, listening to music makes you relaxing and entertainment after the studying time Secondly, you can improve your English or your foreign languages such as when you sing along the English songs, your pronunciation will exactly, your vocabulary will abundant, you will see more grammar in these lyrics of the songs. Thirdly, listening to music when you study is the good ideas make you concentrate and focus the subjects. Besides, many teenagers listening to music for their studying, it helps their life better by its melody. For these reasons, listening to music is necessary for leisure time of teenagers.

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Answer 1

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