Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

Question

Recently, because of the increase in the amount of houses and buildings, which leads to the lack of free areas, there has been an argument between building houses and mansions. Some people believe that mansions bring more benefits to dwellers, while others want to live in houses instead of tall buildings. In my opinion,both skyscrapers and houses has its own advantages and disadvantages

 

Urban residents are tend to live in skyscrapers due to several reasons. First of all, in cities, there are not only buildings are built but also many other huge constructions such as hospitals, schools or shopping malls. Parks and forests are as essential as those constructions. As a result, there will be not enough land to build houses, and government needs to think another solution to ensure accommodation for citizen. Moreover, as I have said before, because of the lack of area, the price of land will increase dramatically, especially when a customer wants to have a house in a nice position. So, instead of accepting building a house, buying a room in a luxury skyscraper will be more suitable. However, living in a mansion has its own limitation, for instance, the privacy of each person will be affected, or it will be harder to rescue yourself in emergency situation.

 

In rural region, the opportunity of having an own house will be much easier. The amount of public constructions in countryside is not as much as in a city, so if a person wants to have a peaceful life when having enough money, he can move to a far away region to build owned house. On the contrary, living conditions in countrysides will be not as comfortable as in developed areas. What I mean is, because there are not enough hospitals and schools, so children are not likely to go to school, the elder are not able to treat carefully, finding a job will be more difficult as well. 

 

In conclusion, residents in tall buildings and an enormous house in a wide land will get different positive sides and drawbacks. Owners should know how to improve the good sides and reduce harmful impacts from these kinds of residences.

Answer 1

Theo mình thì cái nghĩa của mansion trong bài này không được hợp lí lắm . Manison giống kiểu dinh thự hơn . Mình nghĩ thay vì xài 1 từ house ở trên introduction thì xài theo phrase kiểu to sprawl dwelling place across the landscape , a place to reside thay cho house ở phần body cũng được , high-rise , vertical bulding thay cho skyscraper cũng ổn  , erect thay cho build . Kiếm càng nhiều synonyms thì càng tốt thoiii