My role model

Question

Many of us have role models in our lives and to most people role models are athletes or movie stars, but to me, my mother is my role model. When I have children, I want to do for my kid like she takes care me. The reasons I love her very much, I can talk about it all day. The first thing is she is knowledgable and principal. Seldom do she wake up late, because she’s so hard on herself. She always finds new things to learn such as cooking, reading books, watching TV shows,….; it makes her more interesting to others. Secondly, she is my best friend. I share everything with her. When I’m upset, she’s always be there to listen my confidence. She gives the best advice for me because she has been through what I am going through now as a teenager. My mom is the best thing I have in my life. She will always be my role model. I love you mom.

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Many of us have role models in our lives and to most people role models are athletes or movie stars, but to me, my mother is my role model. When I have children, I want to do for my kid like she takes care me. The reasons I love her very much, I can talk about it all day. The first thing is she is knowledgable and principal. Seldom do she wake up late, because she’s so hard (disciplined) on herself. She always finds new things to learn such as cooking, reading books and watching TV shows,….; it which makes her more interesting to others. Secondly, she is my best friend. I share everything with her. When I’m upset, she’s always be there to listen my confidence. She gives the best advice for me because she has been through what I am going through now as a teenager. My mom is the best thing person I have in my life. She will always be my role model. I love you mom.

Câu màu vàng mình nghĩ nên viết thế này thì hay hơn

" Many people have their own role models and I am no exception. For other individuals, their role models can be athletes or movie stars, but for me, the person who I really admire and look up to is my mother. 

Còn câu màu đỏ :

" I want to look after/ care for my kids like she takes care of me"

Câu màu xanh :

" There are a variety of reasons why I love her very much which I can talk about all day"