bài IELTS task 1 tối 21/02 - IDP Quảng Nam_ writing a letter to the organisers of the Memory course.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Linda. I'm 50 who have worked as a teacher in a high school. I married with two children. I came across about the Memory course advertisement of you while i was walking along the street. You know, i was really happy and exicted because i had difficulty remembering about something facts. I was too stress to do anything just about this problem for a long time. That's why i want to participate in this course to improve my memories and make friends. I used some ways but  it went. So, i want to know what methods you apply. Futhermore, i need to get about this course fees as well as about the dates. As i said, i'm a teacher so i have a little of free time, so i hope you can offer flexible hours.

I think i could benefit a great deal from your course and look forward to your reply.

Yours respectfully!

Linda.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Linda. I'm 50 and I work as a teacher in a high school. I married with  and have two children. I came across about to the Memory course advertisement of yours while i was walking along the street. You knowI am really happy and exicted because i had a difficulty remembering about something facts (what is a 'something facts'? I can't get you) and I have been getting struggle to solve this. I was too stressed to do anything just for this problem for a long time. That's why i want to participate in this course to improve my memories and make friends. I even tried using some ways from the Internet but  they went so wrong ( this sentence should be put behind sentence " I was too stress...'). So, i want to know what methods you apply to help absent-minded people like me. Futhermore, i need to get to know about this course fees as well as about the dates. As i said, i'm a teacher so i have a little of free time, so i hope you can offer flexible hours.

I think i could benefit a great deal from your course and look forward to your reply.

Yours respectfully!

Linda.
 
 
- Bạn nên chú ý những cấu trúc ngữ pháp như "married with", "little" và tập dùng đúng giới từ. Cũng cần chú ý đến thứ tự câu nữa, bạn nên luyện tập viết dàn ý đề viết các câu có thứ tự.
- Quan trọng: Bạn cần phải viết hoa chữ i mặc dù nó không đứng đầu câu. Đây là điều cơ bản nhất mà ai cũng phải biết.
- Câu thứ hai nếu bạn dùng hiện tại hoàn thành thì phải thêm 'for' hoặc 'since' cho câu thêm cụ thể.

 

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