Is it possible to make loyal and sincere friends on social networking sites on the Internet. Why? Why not? Is the Internet a safe place to make friends. Why? Why not?
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In the modern life, We can’t deny  the advantages of the Internet. We do everything on it, such as: shopping, oder things, visit beautiful places by images, … but the Internet has magical ability: It creates connections all over the world. People talk with someone else  by chatting on Facebook, Twitter, or receive news of their realtionship by email,… But, Is it possible to make loyal and sincere friends on social networking sites on the Internet? And is the Internet a safe place to make friends?

 

Unfortunately, there are very very few people who tell the truth about them on the Internet. People will tell something to make them perfect. For example, an ugly girl will never tell the truth abourt her, she will say tha she’s pretty and prove with the photoshop pictures.  Or, a boy want to date with a girl, he won’t tell her about his truth age.In my opinion, many people have a friend who always listen to our troubles on the Internet. We may don’t know their appearance,or anything about their family, but we can talk with them every night, every day, or everytime we are free and surf the internet. But, if we talked with someone we don’t know, it would be very complicated. We tell them everything about our life, and they give us some advices. But, in case they are not good or they are lie what will happened? We can’t know. Imagine that somday you wake up and see your private story is on Facebook. What will you do? You will angry with your online friend who is the only one to know that? You can’t do it, be cause you don’t know anything about him or her.

 

My sister made a relationship with a handsome boyby chatting, and she believed that she would marry him. In fact, that boy’s appearance and character wasn’t as good as what he said. He is selfish, and he also ask my sister to pay the bill for the first meal he is a bad guy!

 

So, the Internet is not the safe place to make friends and it’s not impossible to make loyal and sincere friends on social networking sites.

 

In other side, there are also some people has found their real love on the Internet.. We can have a cheerfulness, considerate, respectable or talented on the Internet. But it’s very difficult. Because, we will rarely meet someone is loyal and good.

 

In conclusion, you must be careful while finding a friend on the internet. But, you just make yourself happy with the online friendship. Just be careful!
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Để mình tổng hợp lại xem nào...:)

1. Spelling : Bạn còn vài chỗ viết sai chính tả, ví dụ như : oder => other ; realtionship => relationship ; abourt => about ; tha => that ; somday => someday
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Good morning  Trần Lâm Nhi , I have read your essay and I see some of the points needed changing as follow:

- Spellling and grammars as it was mentioned below by the guy

- You dont have a clear flow of points. As I understand, your point is 

1. Internet relationship or  friendship are not reliable.

2.  Love on the internet is not reliable ---> As you can see, this two points overlap each other,  I suggest you merging them into just one point, adding another point about safety of relationship on internet such as : relying too much on social networks for friends might make people become aloof and shy....blah blah

Regards,

Duong NGUYEN.

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