Describing a place

Question

Landmark 81 is a super-tall skyscraper in Ho Chi Minh, Viet Nam. The buiding has 81 stories with the hight of 461 meters. It is located on the western bank of the Sai Gon River in Binh Thanh District. It is inspired by the image of bamboo a traditional plant symbolizing strength and unity. I feel impressed about this architecture. Featuring a modern and unusual architecture design that symbolizes the diversity and fast-emergence of city. The skyscaper consist of the luxury  hotel, excellent restaurant and vibrant commercial center, etc. Especially, the biggest ‘Green Buiding’ in Viet Nam. All glass used for exterior  of the fower are Low-E glass. European standard water system was installed in Landmark 81. Bringing environmentally friendly living and entertaiment space for visitors. Landmark 81 is an interesting place so that people can fun and relax. In addition, Landmark 81 is equipped with LED systems. When the sun goes down, the buiding wears a completely new colorful and sparking among the dark. In conclusion, Landmark 81 is the tallest building and  has become a new symbol of prosperity in Sai Gon.

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Landmark 81 is a super-tall skyscraper in Ho Chi Minh, Viet Nam. The buiding has 81 stories with the hight  height of is 461 meters. It is located on the western bank of the Sai Gon River in Binh Thanh District. It is inspired by the image of bamboo a traditional plant symbolizing strength and unity. I feel impressed about this architecture. Featuring a modern and unusual architecture design that symbolizes the diversity and fast-emergence of city. The skyscaper consist of the luxury  hotel, excellent restaurant and vibrant commercial center, etc. Especially, the biggest ‘Green Buiding’ in Viet Nam. All glass used for exterior  of the fower are Low-E glass. European standard water system was installed in Landmark 81. Bringing environmentally friendly living and entertaiment space for visitors. Landmark 81 is an interesting place so that people can fun and relax. In addition, Landmark 81 is equipped with LED systems. When the sun goes down, the buiding wears a completely new colorful and sparking among the dark. In conclusion, Landmark 81 is the tallest building and  has become becoming a new symbol of prosperity in Sai Gon.

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