Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.

Question

Nowadays, we can see a lot of manufacturing companies use advertisement to launch their new products. There are many ways to create advertisement so it is still some negative aspects and things below will figure out how unethical and unacceptable advertisement are.

To begin with, some advertisement tell facts that actually false about their products even tricks to induce the customers. First, advertising company usually overdo the quality of the product and consumers may misunderstand. For example, in canned juice fruit, labels says: “ninety percent fresh fruit” or “sugar-free” but in fact, it is just twenty or thirty percent is fresh and they put a lot of sugar to make it sweet. Second, companies sell a fake brand name product with high cost. As a result of low-quality, the customers’ health will be influenced especially injury from cosmetics.

Besides, some ads have sexy and violent scences so the children are affected in the same way leads to bad behaviour. In addition, to make their products go to viral, they do anything they can such as spam email, junk mail or telemarketing. These can disturb the customers when thay are watching TV or driving on the road. Overall, advertising help manufacturing companies sell more products but every illegal actions must be banned to protect the rights of consumers.

To sum up, be careful with what you see in advertisement and have a smart choice when buying something by advertisement.

 

 

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