ielts task 2 ngày 1/12/2018

Question

In contemporary life, education fee has never failed to attract people’s attention and provoked controversy. In some nations, the government is responsible for the cost of juvenile education; nonetheless, this may cause some potential problems. Personally, I believe that the benefits of this issue are greater.

On the one hand, there are several positive impacts when the Government provides some financial support for children's education. Firstly, the Government subsidy will encourage more and more children to go to school especially underprivileged children. As a result, the children who go to school will have more chances to find a job, and they would be the future workforce for the country. Secondly, support from the Government may lift the financial burden for low-income families so that their parents can have more money to spend on food and medical care for them.

On the other hand, there still exist some drawbacks concerning government support for education. To begin with, the government's fund is concentrating on education so that many social services will not be taken care of by the Government. For example, healthcare services and other sectors of the economy would not be paid attention which results in raising tax would be taken. The government's support to pay tuition helps many disadvantaged children to go to school; however, it will decrease students motivation to study so that they may be distracted and learn to deteriorate. However, these negative consequences can be negated by the contributions that children make to their countries when they grow older.

In conclusion, although spending the national budget on the education of children may have potential problems, I believe that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.